Criteria:
1.3. Immediate Feedback, 2.1.1. Concision, 2.2. Information Density
Description:
The user is already focus, irritated, and stressed due to this poor experience. They then have to read all of this information to be sure they didn't forget anything and to not have to pay additional fees.
Recommendation:
Reduce the amount of text, go to the essential information, and put legal mentions elsewhere to free up space.